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Lesson Plans

Literature For Composition ©2000

by Barnet, Berman, Burto, Cain, and Stubbs

Lesson Plan 5

Chapter 7: "Critical Thinking: Asking Questions and Making Comparisons"
Chapter 8: "Reading (and Writing About) Essays"



Suggested Pacing

The following lesson plan covers two weeks of AP* class periods, offering a framework for Chapters 7 and 8.

Objectives

  • Synthesize ideas on critical thinking about essays through a discussion of disposition, or form.
  • Develop further strategies for taking both the multiple-choice and free-response portions of the AP* Literature and AP* Language tests.

Framework

Disposition
Disposition is better known under some of its synonyms: arrangement, organization, structure, and form. After a writer has engaged invention—after he or she has considered the possible choices in terms of audience, occasion, and subject—a writer is ready to "dispose" of topic and ideas through writing. Where invention is the process of opening up, of considering all rhetorical options, disposition is the process of closing down, tightening. In other words, once a writer has made a decision to "dispose" of the material in a certain way, other inventive options are now closed.

Yet it is erroneous to state that once disposition begins, processes of invention are over. Invention interacts with disposition in an ongoing and organic manner, for once a decision is made about disposition, invention comes into play again as the writer determines what is possible within the newly limited scope. Indeed, the process of disposition is a succession of such choices; each time a choice is made, all other options to that particular choice are eliminated. As a writer makes choices in regard to disposition, he or she must keep one foundational principle in mind: Form must follow the function of the writing, or as Marshall McLuhan famously said, "the medium is the message."

Much of Literature for Composition is devoted to disposition. When students read about how to write an introduction, how to formulate a thesis statement, or how to summarize an essay, they are in essence learning the "how to" of disposition. Now that students are armed with a working knowledge of the principles of invention (ethos, logos, pathos), they are in an even better position to tackle discussions about disposition, for they now understand that the choices they make in terms of form must follow the function of ethos, logos, and pathos in their writing. In order to be credible writers, and construct a well-reasoned, as well as emotionally persuasive, piece of writing, students must first understand the rhetorical choices open to them through invention so that they can make well-informed choices with regard to disposition.

DAY 1:    Disposition and Critical Thinking: Asking Questions and Making Comparisons


A good genre to use to begin thinking about disposition is poetry. Something holds poems together, and that "something" is rarely the overt, syllogistic logic of a Marvell poem. Especially with modern poetry, that "something" is not always a predestined medium such as a Shakespearean sonnet. Yet all poems have some kind of internal structure or set of "girders" that hold them together.

Have students read "Buffalo Bill's" by e.e. cummings (p. 153), T. S. Eliot's "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" (pp. 602–604), and "To Live in the Borderlands Means You" by Gloria Anzaldúa (pp. 1088–1089). Then have students work through the following questions, which are intended to open up lines of inquiry into structural choices and their link to meaning:

  • Look visually at all three poems. What do you see? How does the visual layout of the poem represent the poet's topic or subject matter?
  • More precisely, why do you think that "Buffalo Bill's" is arranged like irregular stairsteps, "Prufrock" in changing stanza lengths (with certain indents), and "Borderlands" with the first line of each stanza to the left of all succeeding lines?
  • Look at the words: how cummings smashes some words together on the page and leaves others all alone; how Eliot uses structural devices such as ellipses, dashes, quotation marks, and single-word sentences to highlight and separate his words; and how Anzaldúa mixes Spanish with English. How do each of these poems use words differently? Do you see similarities in how each uses words? What purpose do these words serve in terms of the overall meaning of each poem?
  • Articulate an organizational pattern for each poem. What comes first? What happens in the middle? How does each poem conclude? Do these organizational patterns make "sense"? If so, how? If not, why? (Consider how cummings's poem begins with the words "Buffalo Bill's" and ends with "Mister Death," while "Prufrock" begins with a quotation from Dante's Inferno and "Borderlands" begins each stanza with a slightly different version of the poem's title.)
  • Look at each title (remember that cummings's poem is actually untitled). How does the title impact the overall structure of the poem? Does the lack of a title change the structure of cummings's poem? If so, how? If not, why?
  • For each poem, where does the "main idea" come within the structure? At a climax? At the end? Repeatedly throughout the whole? In the title? How does the rest of the structure support that main idea?
  • How does each poem end? Does the ending "fit" the overall structure of the poem? If so, how? If not, why?

All three poems illustrate that a poem's form is integral to a poem's meaning. It is easiest to see this perhaps in the arrowhead-like look of cummings's "Buffalo Bill's" coupled with his use of both single words and run-together words, which are meant to illustrate certain aspects of both Buffalo Bill the person, as well as a certain cultural myth of American history. Meaning is impossible or at least drastically curtailed in poetry unless form follows function, unless form is created as a necessary and pointed factor for a poet's purpose.

In addition to thinking about poetic structure, through this discussion students are engaging in the acts of literary comparison and contrast defined on p. 152, which are principle elements of critical thinking about literature.

DAY 2:    Disposition and Critical Thinking: Asking Questions and Making Comparisons, Continued

  1. Returning to the poem "Buffalo Bill's" that students worked with in the previous class, have students rewrite the poem by turning it from a poem into a prose piece. Students are to eliminate cummings's line breaks as well as the way he runs his words together. They will need to decide on punctuation to provide sentences, but they may not alter the order of the words, omit any, or add any.

    Once students have rewritten cummings's poem, have them discuss the following questions as an entire class:
    • What happened to the poem when you turned it from poetry to prose?
    • How did you decide where to put your punctuation? What kind of punctuation did you use? Why?
    • Other members of your class probably punctuated the poem differently. Is there a "best" way to punctuate the poem as a prose piece? If so, why? If not, why?
    • How does the meaning of cummings's poem change when the original structure is removed?
  2. After the discussion, have students turn to the modern transcription of one of cummings's preliminary drafts of "Buffalo Bill's" (p. 155). Comparing and contrasting this draft with the final poem, have students discuss how the architecture of cummings's final version differs from the original sketch and what difference it makes in the poem that cummings chose the form he did. By the end of the period, students should begin to see that cummings's poem has a deliberate structure, one that works best given his intended meaning. During the discussion, students will need to talk about what, precisely, cummings's intended meaning is.

DAY 3:    Disposition and Critical Thinking: Asking Questions and Making Comparisons, Continued

  1. Ask students to return to "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" to write a three-part, in-class exercise. Students are first to take apart and reassemble "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by mixing and matching stanzas, lines, and words. For instance, they are to remove a line and move it elsewhere in the poem, or take a group of lines and move them elsewhere. They could transpose the ending and the beginning, or move part of the middle to the end.

    Then they are to look at Eliot's words and repeat the most important word or words in various places throughout the work—or repeat the least important word or words. Or they could omit a crucial word completely. Students may not add anything that is not in the original poem, although they should feel free to omit phrases or language. The final version must make sense; students may not rewrite it into gobbledygook. Most important, students are to try to retain Eliot's sense of poetic structure, even as they make these alterations. In other words, students are not to turn Eliot's "Prufrock" into an Emily Dickinson or a Shel Silverstein poem.

  2. Once students have had sufficient time to make the first transformation, have them make another. They are to return to "Buffalo Bill's" and insert lines from cummings's poem into the new version of "Prufrock." Again, they may not add words that are not in cummings's original work, but they may repeat lines and words, using as much or as little as they like. Also, students must incorporate cummings's words and lines into Eliot's original structure; the final version must retain the look of "Prufrock" on the page rather than "Buffalo Bill's." Students must make sure that the new poem makes "sense."

  3. Again, once students have had sufficient time to make the second transformation, have them make one more. Have them turn to Anzaldúa's "Borderlands" and insert words and lines from her poem into their version of "Prufrock"—the version that now includes part of cummings's "Buffalo Bill's." Once more, students may not add words that are not in "Borderlands," and they must make sure that the latest version makes sense. Also, students must try to incorporate Anzaldúa into Eliot's structure; the final poem in some way should still look like "Prufrock." Students should feel free to use only some of Anzaldúa's words and phrases or to repeat certain language as they wish.

    Students should bring all three versions of their "Prufrock" poems with them to the next class.

DAY 4:    Disposition and Critical Thinking: Asking Questions and Making Comparisons, Completed


Building on the previous class's writing, have students discuss the following questions as an entire class. You may wish to have one or two students read their final revised poems aloud so that the class has a shared base to work from. As the class works through the questions, you may want students to read parts of their poems aloud as evidence for their individual responses. Refer students to p. 153 for a discussion of evidence in this context.

  • Returning to the original version of Eliot's "Prufrock," look again at the poem's structure and recall how that structure is linked to the poem's meaning. How did the structure—and therefore the meaning—change when you modified the poem's movement by mixing and matching Eliot's stanzas, lines, and words?
  • How did the structure and meaning change when you altered the poem by inserting lines and words from "Buffalo Bill's"?
  • Eliot and cummings were contemporaries ("Buffalo Bill's" was written in 1917, and "Prufrock" was published the same year). Do you think their similar historical and cultural contexts make any difference in how their respective language and syntax fit together?
  • On the other hand, when cummings wrote "Buffalo Bill's," he was living in the United States, while Eliot was living in London when he published "Prufrock." Though both men were interested in unconventional poetics, cummings took apart traditional syntax and punctuation, whereas Eliot retained certain traditional marks of poetry, including literary allusion. In this sense, their cultural contexts were not quite the same. Do you think this makes any difference in how their respective language and syntax do not fit together?
  • How did the structure and meaning change when you revised the poem once again by incorporating stanzas, lines, and words from "Borderlands"? Did the insertion of Spanish make a difference? If so, how? If not, why?
  • Anzaldúa published this poem in 1987, so obviously her cultural referents are much more modern than those in "Prufrock" or "Buffalo Bill's." How does this historical difference reflect what happened when you amalgamated the Eliot-cummings rendition with Anzaldúa?
  • You were asked to retain Eliot's original structure as much as possible with each poetic transformation. Were you successful? Was it difficult? What strategies or tactics did you use to be true to Eliot's form? How did the poem's meaning change when you arrived at your final revision that included Eliot's, cumming's, and Anzaldúa's words together? How was that change linked to the poem's new structure?
  • What does all of this transforming tell you about the relationship between a poem's meaning and how it is put together, its form?

By the end of this period, students should have a good sense of what literary disposition is and its importance to literary meaning. In addition, students will have demonstrated extended literary analysis through certain precepts of critical thinking, especially comparison, contrast, and the use of literary evidence to support one's claims.

DAY 5:    Disposition and Reading (and Writing About) Essays


To lead students toward recognizing disposition in longer works, have them turn to an examination of disposition in various essays. To begin, have students work on the specific parts of a single essay—Jonathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal" (pp. 173–178)—before they come together to think about how those parts link together to form a certain structure.

Swift's essay follows a classical form of disposition: the Ciceronian Oration. The parts of a Ciceronian Oration are exordium, narratio, propositio, partitio, confirmatio, confutatio (or refutatio), digressio, and peroratio. Add an "n" to the ends of the words ending in "o," and, for the most part, one readily sees the English language equivalents of these terms. Structurally, the first four parts (exordium through partitio) establish authorial ethos. The confirmatio and confutatio, the sections that constitute most of the main text of an essay, are formed through logos. The digressio, also part of the main text, introduces overt pathos into the writing. Finally, the peroratio reestablishes ethos to generate audience good will.

Here is a brief description of how each part functions in terms of classical rhetoric:

Exordium: Unlike the typical modern dictum that the introduction of an essay must "grab the reader's attention," the exordium simply presents the topic as one worthy of consideration. Because most readers lose attention later on in an essay, it is not important to "grab attention" at the start; rather, a writer explains why the topic at hand is worth the reader's time and response.

Narratio: Narratio does not mean "narrative" in the modern-day sense but, instead, presents any necessary background information to the reader. The writer must provide enough information to help the reader think about the topic in an informed manner; thus, the narratio might be definitional, statistical, chronological, or historic. It might relate a quotation or a statistic, explain the various sides of a controversy, or furnish an important summary. The authors of the text talk about this same idea in explaining that a writer must summarize the significance of someone else's essay if that essay is the topic of the writer's analysis (pp. 166–170).

Propositio: The propositio (proposition) is the point at which the writer finally takes a position on his or her topic. Until this time, the writer has not divulged an opinion about the topic—no thesis has been assumed. The propositio is either syllogistic—that is, consisting of a major premise, a minor premise, and a conclusion, or enthymemic—that is, a syllogism in which the minor premise is omitted. In other words, the propositio is a complex sentence that is positional (the writer takes a stand) and controversial (in that the writer is gutsy enough to take on a difficult topic).

Partitio: The partitio is a subcategory of the propositio and outlines the major arguments that constitute the author's approach to proving the thesis. The partitio involves the writer's lines of inquiry, or topoi.

Confirmatio: The confirmatio does what one expects, given the suggestiveness of the English word confirmation. It confirms what has been asserted in the propositio. Through various appeals to logos—patterns of reasoning—and oftentimes a display of secondary evidence or non-artistic proofs that come from outside the writer such as data, statistics, quotations, interviews, and the like, the writer confirms the truth of the thesis with various rhetorical examples.

Confutatio (or Refutatio): As is suggested by the English word refutation, the confutatio (or refutatio) preempts potential disagreements to the propositio by presupposing the main objections to the essay's thesis. The writer argues against each objection, thereby attacking, via logos, any opposition before such opposition even has a chance to voice its disagreement.

Digressio: Unlike the confirmatio and confutatio that take logos as their rhetorical strategy, the digressio engages pathos. Where some readers might be moved by examples and quotations, others will not be moved without an appeal to emotion; thus, the digressio entails a story, an anecdote, an extended metaphor, a myth, or an allegory—something that takes the more abstracted propositio and "brings it home" to the reader through narration, description, and imagery.

Peroratio: Finally, the peroratio is not merely a reiteration of the propositio. Rather, the writer answers the question, "So what?" What does this argument mean for the future? For humanity? For me, personally? Returning to the effort to build credibility through ethos in the peroratio, the writer shows his or her capacity for thinking broadly and in a visionary manner about the ways the reader and writer may, together, envision an idealized future as a direct result of the writer's argument.

Swift's essay is a good one to study to understand the parts of the Ciceronian Oration because Swift intended to exaggerate the parts, even alluding to Cicero's orational structure through his transitions ("I shall now therefore humbly propose . . . ," "I have too long digressed," "I can think of no one objection").Yet Swift's topic is ridiculous; therefore, the orational form is not appropriate for the essay's content. Because Swift knew his Cicero, he obviously intended to misuse the form in order to achieve a purpose other than the stated one of "A Modest Proposal."

For this class period, once you have explained each of the parts of a Ciceronian Oration and their rhetorical function, have students work through Swift's essay, marking the parts of an oration as they go. This may be done either in groups or as a whole class. If you use groups to begin with, make sure to confer as an entire class before the end of the period.

DAY 6:    Disposition and Reading (and Writing About) Essays, Continued

  1. Building on the previous work with Swift's essay, begin class by discussing Swift's ethos as narrator. Swift is matter-of-fact, detached, sometimes chatty, as well as pseudo-scientific in his use of statistical information. By combining an analysis of disposition with ethos, some of the ironic disparities between both Swift's form and content and his ethos and subject come to the fore. Clearly, in "A Modest Proposal," form does not match function; ethos does not match subject matter. Here are some questions for class discussion:
    • Why would the classically educated Swift, who obviously knew his Cicero, employ this approach for such a topic?
    • When there is such disparity in writing, then irony or satire emerges. In what way, then, does the exaggerated use of the Ciceronian Oration aid Swift's satire?
    • How does Swift's form both create and fight against the narrative voice or ethos?
    • How do form and voice produce the "meaning" of the writing?
    Students should arrive at the conclusion that the form itself that Swift chose mocks Swift's intended audience (the English). Through the use of a form that similarly educated Englishmen would recognize, Swift makes literal what he believes the English are doing metaphorically—"eating" the Irish by colonizing them and consuming their resources.

    The important idea that should emerge from such a discussion is that how a writer structures a piece of writing determines how a reader understands the writing. Structure is not something "out there" that a writer receives through divine inspiration; it is carefully measured and created by a writer to generate specific rhetorical outcomes. This idea is crucial because once students realize they control disposition, they realize they can mold their medium to their own ends. Organization is not about plugging one's writing into a preset mold; instead, organization is part and parcel of a writer's specific intention—and each piece of writing necessitates a new approach to structure. Form is function.

  2. For the next day, students must choose to work with one of the remaining essays from Chapter 8, Virginia Woolf's "The Death of the Moth" (pp. 179–181); Langston Hughes's "Salvation" (pp. 181–183); Sallie Bingham's "A Woman's Land" (pp. 183–186); or Louis Owens's "The American Indian Wilderness" (pp. 187–189). As a homework assignment, students should read their chosen essay with care, paying close attention to its structure.

DAY 7:    Disposition and Reading (and Writing About) Essays, Continued

Today students write an in-class essay in which they create a Ciceronian Oration out of the essay from Chapter 8 that they have chosen. This assignment has a dual function. First, it necessitates that students both understand the original structure of their specific essay as well as the structure of a Ciceronian Oration, and, second, it necessitates that students take on the voice of another writer, which will ready them for discussions of style later on.

Obviously, students will have to rearrange certain parts of their essays as well as create new parts as they change them from the original structures developed by Woolf, Hughes, Bingham, or Owens into a Ciceronian Oration. Students may use or omit any part of the original essay they wish, and they may add anything they believe they need in order to make their oration convincing. They do not need to use quotation marks when they employ direct quotations because they are to act as if they are Woolf or Hughes or Bingham or Owens. Students are to mimic the author's style and tone.

At this juncture, it is not necessary to have a discussion about what aspects of writing constitute a writer's style or tone. The students' previous work with tone through ethos is sufficient for them to get a feeling for the rhetorical techniques they will have to engage to do the job. If you wish, you may touch on the short discussions of these ideas in the text's sections on the essayist's persona—another term for ethos—and the essayist's tone (pp. 162–164).

Students working with Woolf and Hughes will have to infer what the argument, or propositio, is for their oration because these two authors do not state an overt, argumentative thesis. Indeed, Woolf's essay is meditative, "chiefly concerned with exploring an idea or a feeling," whereas Hughes's essay is largely narrative, "recount[ing] some happening." Bingham's is a combination of meditative and argumentative, whereas Owens's essay is both meditative and expository. See the text, pp. 161–162, for definitions of each of these types of essays.

DAY 8:    Disposition and Reading (and Writing About) Essays, Completed

  1. Begin the class by having several volunteers read aloud their versions of the rewritten essays from the previous period. Have the class determine how the essays conform to the classical Ciceronian form. Have the class share opinions about how easy or how difficult it was to write to the Ciceronian Oration structure and why.

  2. Now students are ready to tackle disposition in a Ciceronian Oration of their own on a topic of their choice. This assignment synthesizes what students have learned up to this point, requiring that they construct a viable and credible ethos, use reasonable logos, create pathos, and employ a certain disposition. This assignment also teaches a certain form without confining students within that form. In other words, students will consider the Ciceronian Oration a tool that they can use to fashion their writing depending on their topic rather than as a prison that they must fit themselves and their topic into because they were told to do so.

    By first transforming another's essay into this form, students will have learned how the form works. This was the main purpose in having them write a formulaic Ciceronian Oration from someone else's essay. In this formal paper, rather than writing about essays, students will write their own essays. Encourage students to experiment in their writing with the form of the Ciceronian Oration, perhaps attempting the digressio first, or using an allegory for the digressio; perhaps making the majority of the paper a confutatio rather than the expected confirmatio; or perhaps holding the propositio until the very end of the piece. In fact, students should be told that the end result of their own Ciceronian Orations need not be "good" under traditional standards of judgment. Rather, "good" is defined here by how much students creatively risk, how much they make the form their own in order to realize the organic, supple nature of their orations.

    Although students may choose any topic they wish, it is a good idea to caution students that they will find it difficult to write about an inflammatory and stereotypic topic such as abortion rights or euthanasia because it is difficult to distance oneself enough to be objective—to see arguments against one's opinion and treat them through logic—and it is difficult to find something fresh and engaging to say about such topics. However, such topics might be treated through satire—in the manner of Swift—and be quite compelling.


APPLICATION TO THE AP* EXAM

In planning their essays, encourage students to spend two to three minutes brainstorming all the ideas they can about the topic of the writing prompt. They then should create an outline, not by rewriting their ideas, but by numbering them in the order in which they think they will use the ideas. Once students begin writing, they may find that a better order grows out of their writing, but this will get them started.

DAY 9:    The Mock AP* Exam


To give students practice in writing timed essays similar to those on the AP* exams, provide the following writing prompt and have students complete their planning and writing in 40 minutes. Students will need access to their texts in order to read the excerpt.

Read paragraphs 1, 4, 5, 9, and 10 of Louis Menand's "Love Stories" (pp. 530– 531). In a well-reasoned, carefully organized, and effectively supported essay, attack or defend Menand's position on the relationships among culture, acculturation, and pleasure.

EVALUATION

DAY 10:    An Analysis of Disposition and Literature


Have students reread all the essays they have written to date, both in-class and out-of-class, formal and informal. Have each student use the list of attributes of "good writing" that was already generated by the class to determine which pieces of his or her writing or which parts are the most effective and why.